Undone

unraveling at the sides
our souls untied
we spoke lies
Threw out cries
Into blank spaces
Mad at these races
For creating places
In which you and I
Could not get by
So commitment died
And so did our tries.

– Lita

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2 Replies to “Undone”

    1. I really appreciate this. I just recently got the guts to put my work out there again and this was just exactly what I needed. It’s hits home even more because it is from home (always lovely to meet another South African here.)

      Thank you for taking the time to visit me and leaving such a meaningful message.

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